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BGS: John Keel

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 1:27 pm
by John Keel
Ok now i give it a try, here is the first part of my bgs of my Tank, i will continue it as soon as possible:

Pounding the Drums of War

Today was going to be the day they all have been looking forward to. The 52nd genetic engineered heavy infantry platoon was standing still line in line, 500 gentanks wich just completed the basic military training. They all have been waiting for this one day, the day they have been created for, today was the day they would finally recive the movement order to go to war with the “Dome of York”, rumors said this whole war was just because of an Datadisc, the tanks did not care why they where going to fight as they where “born” to fight.

Seargant at arms John Keel was verry excited and sweating in his armor, from one second to the other there was silence in the hall, two monks entered the room and stopped infront of the platoon all tanks saluted.

The first Monk was the lead scientist of the GenTank project, the father of all GenTanks, everyone said that he has unbeliveable passive psi powers. The second Monk was a highly honored general of Regent, he was fighting in the most important battles, he was the opposite of the first Monk and had unbeliveable aggressive powers.

John felt, just as everyone else in the hall, they where chosen to follow him to the Dome to fight the final battle, they where going to be verry dissapointed. The general started to Speak:”You all know that you have been created to fight and to protect the lives of the citicen of Neocron.” The tanks yelled. “I am coming directly from the Dome of York, Ceres has surrenderd, and we have now full access to the Ceres disk.” The tanks yelled again but not all, some of them began to understood what that ment. “That means that we do not need you fighters anymore, you are dismissed, you are free to do whatever you want, the war is over.” Saying theese words the monk turned around and was about to leave.

“We may do what we want?” Screamed a lieutenant a couple of rows before John, “i tell you what we want, we want to fight.” All Tanks yelled “FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT.” The general was verry angry, his eyes flashed and electric sparks surrounded him, “i said you are dismissed, now leave before the wraith of crahn will hit you!” The lieutenant pulled out a grenade and was about to hurl it to the two monks when a lightning struck him down, the grenade dropped on the ground and killed 5 tanks.

The explosions and lightnings set the tanks into a rage, The scientist whispered to the general:”We better leave now”, when the tanks ran to the monks to slaughter them. The temperature raised and with a blink of an eye a Flame wave whiped out over hundered tanks. A couple of tanks started to destroy the building they have been in, they pushed a pillar which fell into the direction of the general and smashed him.

The scientist rolled his eyes and said: “i told you we better leave this place but NO!” he grabbed the hand of the general and in a bright flash they dissapeared. As there was no “enemy” left to fight some of the tanks turned against each other and started to kill the other tanks with their bare hands, while others suicided.

John Keel didnt understand what was happening, he was made to kill enemys of Neocron and now as there was no one to fight the ones that should fight together with where starting to fight each other, his whole world was shattered in pieces. With a dull bang everything turned black, John was unconcious.

To be continued ....

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 5:55 pm
by Brammers
ooc: Very good! More please!

P.S. Do you want me to add this to the THN Stories, or you want me to wait until it's finished?

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 6:56 pm
by John Keel
i think i wait till its finished ... or atleast till i got more, already got some ideas

PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 9:13 pm
by sanityislost
Wooooooo very sweet!

SiL ..:..

PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 9:21 am
by Bugs Gunny
I like it a lot.
More please :-)

PostPosted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 10:16 pm
by John Keel

The remaining soldiers of the Dome of York Army have been split, the intelligence departement reported sightings off small groups all over the world. The General was not pleased about it, if he was going to unite all the troops it would take forever, he had to face it, the dome was lost, he smashed the datadisc on the ground and turned around to his Battalion.
“OK the we are close to that secret base, when we found it the first wave goes in, kills the guards and gives the signal for the second wave to go in and whipe out all of Regents minions inside the base. After that the Engineer troop move in and built up the defence grid. We will see about the rest later when the time has come.”

It was the next morning when the troops arrived at the entrance to the valley where they thought to find an secret base of Neocron. “First wave commander to general Soong, we are inside, we do not find any resistance, most of the buildings are destroyed and corpses everywhere. Looks like someone was faster then us!” shouted a voice over the radio. “I am not sure if i understood you correct please repeat!” the General replied. “The base is destroyed no one is here the base and no burnmarks or fires, like someone just had torn it apart with bare hands.” “Ok second wave go in, engineer troop follow in 10 minutes”

General Soong called for his commanding staff, “what now?” He asked them, “We can use some of the smaller buildings that have not been destroyed and we can use the rubble from the destroyed buildings to build new.” Said the leader of the engineer troop. “Ok, and the soldiers search the ruins, burn the corpses and collect all equipent that can still be used.” said the General. “We got a lot of work to do, time is money so we better don’t waste it!”

Two hours later a spy rushed into the command centre of the new base, a small hutt that was propably a storage for the maintenance equipment and since all the equipment was all used for the construction of the new base it was empty and the only room big enough for the command centre, the spy tried to catch his breath, “sir ... *cough* surviving ... regent trooper!” “What are you talking about?” Asked the General. The spy took a deep breath. “We found a surviver in the ruins, he is propably in some kind of coma, but the scientists think if they analyse him they could find out how those wierd monks of regent created them!” The spy had to lean on the wall otherwise he would fall over, he was running to fast but that where important news, they could now have found a way to negate the advantage that Neocron had against them, an eternal source of soldiers. “Ok put him into one of the cryo-regeneration units and i want the scientist to find out how we can duplicate the cloning proces or even improve it!” said the General. “Sir, Yes Sir,” yelled the spy turned around and nearly fell while he was running out of the “CC”.

Some month later the engineers finished their work, they built a complete new base and an defence grid that would resist every attack Neocron could bring, they found a lot of equipment that needed to be identified and a huge data disc store, to make it short a lot of work. Finally the General found the time to see this GenTank locked into the cryo-unit. He put all his hopes into the GenTank research. “John Keel, Seargent at arms. Reg. No. #DEP74.A16874.” said the General looking at the dogtag of the tank. “You made any progress?” He asked the scientists. “We learned a lot about the cloning process from the discs and analysed the Tanks DNA.” Said one of the scientists, “we are sure that we can start the process verry soon!” “Verry good, work harder on that!” The scientists looked worried after the General, they knew that he lost his mind at the point the Dome surendered.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 10:16 pm
by John Keel
working on more

PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 1:52 pm
by Junker D Coy
damn i need a serious kick in the butt so i get going finishing this story :lol:

PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:21 pm
by John Keel
i just started another story a friend convinced me to .. gah now i am writing on 2 storys :( i am stupid ^^

but the other one has nothing to do with NC so i wont mix the things up atleast ^^

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 11:34 am
by silent000
Brammers wrote:ooc: Very good! More please!

P.S. Do you want me to add this to the THN Stories, or you want me to wait until it's finished?

[Edited: Flaming]