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PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 4:24 am
by sanityislost
Damn nice one once again, shame its done tho
Should really post that on the NC forums :P



SiL ..:..

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 1:14 pm
by [TgR]KILLER
brilliant story :D just finished reading the last parts..

afaik husk was making a pdf version right ? i think you really should post that on the offi forums ^^

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 3:37 pm
by HusK
[TgR]KILLER wrote:brilliant story :D just finished reading the last parts..

afaik husk was making a pdf version right ? i think you really should post that on the offi forums ^^


Not at all, I was just making a start with the pictures for it, but so far I haven't done much, and will do less as my account is yet inactive and my bank account is once more, less than empty(below zero again).

I will be playing fomk meanwhile, as I got no money and its free... till I get bored and then we'll see again.

Somebody should really take over the picture business as its clear I'm not able to for now.

Re: Credits

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 7:12 pm
by Morpheous
Lisa Merlins wrote:The Fall of Techhaven. Written by Lisa Merlins, Brammers, Katherine Mayer and Morpheous.

Story based on the official Neocron 1 Storyline.

Story editor: Lisa Merlins

Storyline graphics: Husk.

Story hosted by: THN (The Tech Haven Network)

Special thanks to Katherine Mayer, and Morpheous for their excellent chapters.

Hi to Marcus and [TgR]Killer for PM’ing me and asking to be included in the story, and Apologies to anyone who got missed out.

Coffee supplied by: Sainsburys and Morrisons.

Thanks to everyone on DoY Teamspeak, Phoenix Vent, and the Techhaven Network for their support and comments. I hope you all enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

No Droms where harmed in the writing of this story.

Lisa Merlins will return in “Rising from the Red Sand.” Exclusive on the THN. (Coming soon)

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo :p

So uber. That's just convinced me to stop playing FoMK Beta and login again ^_^

PostPosted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 8:19 pm
by HusK
well my money seems to be returning to my bank account soon (hope monday) so I might be able to continue my search for the right pictures.

Pray with me on that one :(

PostPosted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:07 am
by HusK
Praise the story writer! hehe :)

Awsome story lisa! As for those wondering on the pdf, the last erm... 4 hours I've been putting it down in word format, cleaning it up etc, to make it ready for pdf.

I still need pictures, whole lots of em, things I can not do on my own, PLEASE HELP damnit *sigh*

here's the (updated) list again:

    Techhaven outside + Techhaven inside
    Clan headquarters picture (different angles and shots)
    Clan headquarters picture + plant pieces in it + glowing hot ball (bright) [photoshop prob needed]
    Clan headquarters destroyed (pik donker, destroyed glass, cabinet, backroom cabs melted into one big lump of metal [photoshop needed]
    Searching rhino towards an uplink
    Picture of the old entrance into techhaven. [- thats the closed door in sector 1 downstairs, the tubes, the entrance itself is not important but the huge round room leading upwards to it is.]
    garyu reading mail lisa merlins [found a perfect pic for this]
    Picture of our old faction hq... the room behind the now closed door in the TH reactor.
    Underground gravis uplink with hack control panels
    execution of son of 'chief systems administrator' in a doy prison sel with a gun. [thinking of outzone prison cell with a pe or spy in it and some doy guard type holding a gun to his head [photoshop needed]
    Techhaven old genrep room (either side will do, both sides be best)
    DoY tunnels pic (with guard) [the guard waiting to get attacked in the story]
    DoY tunnels entrance with doy entrance pic at the back (someplace in the west) would be cool if team of runners was running towards tunnel entrance with doy exploding in the back [photoshop needed]
    Dome of york in ruïns [one of the more destroyed sectors with added flames - photoshop?]
    Inside hacknet: a runner talking to another (male -> female)
    A room with consoles inside hacknet(see last chapter)
    Dead guy in a spike (syncon lab!?)
    Sniper hiding with aimed gun, a tank and some other char...
    APC near hill with gunner and tanks outside
    10 APC's in distance with sandstorm created by them, shot taken from hill.
    Syncon underground with genrep disattached from wall (loos cable)
    APC near doy gate (preferbly with lots of different apc's in the distance)
    some inside shots of hacknet (see last chapters)
    several runners drinking in leroy's doy bar (see last chapter)


Some of them are almost impossible to get a hold off, but any of those pictures, PLEASE look into your old screenshot selections etc for something that even comes close and post em here, anything 'll do. I will take care of the photoshopping... if I will do any anyway.

PostPosted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 7:31 am
by Morpheous
Seems like we're gonna need to get 10 APCs in....
:p

PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:46 pm
by Brammers
The Fall Of Tech Haven (The Director's cut) has been posted to the official Neocron forum http://forum.neocron.com/showthread.php?t=124260

There are a few new little bits there....just a few. :)

PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:50 am
by Tratos
Well, :eek:

Since i've finaly got my ass in Phoenix i decided to catch up everything i missed, i was away from the game when this was posted in the NC forums and never got very far with the story before but now i've filled in all the gaps in my Phoenix Fallen Angels time line and alot of the character storys make more scence now.

Thank you to everyone involved in this story it was an excelent read especialy in one go ;)

PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2005 3:53 pm
by Trillian
Love it! Thought it was great the way you added in Janos and Zane(unless im wrong on that one). I wonder what the person that bombed the store was put through to make them feel that way? Must have been something horrible...

PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:24 pm
by Lisa Merlins
You are correct Trillian, the RI4 is Zane.

As for who was behind the store bombing, well that will be revealed in the Fall of Techhaven Part 2. At the moment I'm writting the first story that happens before the Fall of Techhaven.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:56 pm
by John Keel
ok now after completely reading the story i have to say that is a really good work there :w00t:

PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:35 pm
by Dr J Zoidberg
Unofficial release date: 4th Q 2006

Brammers and I have Coroberated Ideas, and We are going to turn "The Fall of Tehchaven" into a fully cinematic movie.

We are initial ideas and planning at this stage, but there will be more info on it when we clash heads again.

-Z